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Posted May 07, 2012
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Fenixp: Not really, I've got a lot of inspiration and I know everything about game world and... Well basically all I want to convey. I don't have ... let's say, technical experience.
Your grammar could definitely use some work. It holds up decently overall, but it's not good enough to write / tell stories. Once again, my advice would be to read, read and read.

I know you said that you don't need inspiration, but have you read "I have no mouth, and I must scream" ? If not, definitely a must for you (judging from the setting of your story).

If you're not really into English literature, try reading translations by David Magarshack, if you're a fan of Russian literature:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_Magarshack

(And I just realised that he went to my uni!)
Posted May 07, 2012
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Licurg: Technical experience... More specifically, what do you mean by that?
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Fenixp: Well it's always good to know what you're trying to say, but it's useless when you don't have the proper means to actually pass on the information. Quite simply, I just need to learn to write properly.
Have you decided on a style you want to follow?
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