Just smooth out the drawn images more because it may be difficult for others to see what you are trying to represent. Other than that, looking good so far.

Explain Smooth out, and thank you.

Smoothing out means, in this case, make them look like what you are trying to portray. I don't know if it's the quality of the digital images or the blackness of the ink but it is rather difficult for me to see, for example, the T as a barrel of a shotgun or the C as a monster with a big jaw. Another solution would be to leave "DOOM" in the DOOM font and change the word "STICK" to resemble...a stick figure. That would mean the word "STICK" written out in a thin line to make an allusion to the stick figure nature of your art. I hope my comments help and you're welcome.

Its the Blackness of the ink in this case, as for Changing the Stick to resemble a stick figure,
it took me a while to write DOOM so i don't feel like making it again but i will try to make the stuff more smoothed out
As for stick figure nature of my art
i was thinking about going a bit more detailed like this (http://www.iragination.com/clips/bassabyss/screens/newcomerDoomGuy.jpg)
than as he faces bigger monsters he finds bigger weps
like this (http://media.photobucket.com/image/recent/spudmuffins/doomguy.png)
Let me know what you think of the idea.
Also can you do me a fav and list the order in which you get weps
example 1 pistol 2 shogun etc
And order of the monsters 1. zombie, 2 flying head etc
With the offical names of course so i can look them up and use as a reference
would be a great help if you can actually do this.

As far as weapons go, you get the Chainsaw first, then the shotgun, the double barreled one after that, then the chain gun, then the plasma rifle/gun, and, finally, the BFG.

Monsters are listed here: http://www.olddoom.com/enemies.htm

i am thinking about doing colors, but i am worried about the enemyies i mean doomguy is easy when in colors but than the The Spider Mastermind comes and boom not easy to draw the same kind of frames. i guess i will have to wing it and call it colors sure you wouldn't get to see all the details like the bandages of the zombieguy's leg but still be able to make out who it is.
Wish me luck

When I was a boy (as in less than 10 years old), I used to draw two stick figures fencing together. Except that usually it did not just involve regular fencing, but acrobatics as well, sort of like a martial art sword duel. I did not use flip book format, though. Just regular drawings with comic book panel format. But I thought it could make an interesting flip book.